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Letter from Revenue Canada

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In conclusion, I would remark that a denial of registration often results from our evaluation that an applicant is, at heart, a pressure group. Revenue Canada cannot grant charitable status to organizations that act mainly as pressure groups.

Public statement from a chief executive officer

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I envision a leaner corporate center that will give us greater flexibility to move capital and talent to the opportunities that maximize shareholder value. By moving our headquarters, we can save money and make more profit for our shareholders.

Letter from social services

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You (and your opposite sex partner or same sex partner and dependent adult(s), if applicable) are required to come to our office for an interview to update your file. Please come to our office so that we can update your file. Your spouse or partner must also come, as well as any adult who is your dependent.

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